1. Since ancient times cheating has been frowned upon in sports, and some consider using enhance-
ment drugs as cheating. Though fans feel they are the ones being cheated, due to the side effects of
the drugs, the athletes will pay the ultimate price.
2. Enhancement drugs have changed sports from their origin of fair play, and the athletes who use
them may lose the most in the end.
3. The author paints a dark picture for drug using athletes as he states "They will pay the price with
their own lives...". (Martin,582)
The summary is okay, but a bit short, so be sure to be as concise as possible and show all the main ideas presented by your author. With the paraphrasing, review my announcement today about those. It is really important that we keep the author's key points but still give them credit. Also, you should definitely reflect on why you chose the quote you did. Be more thorough and analytical in your writing and reading, to gain more from it. :)
ReplyDeleteI feel like you should have used a lot more effort in this! Good luck in the class and I hope you learn a lot! I know I am just by reading the comments of the others and the feedback from our teacher. Looking at her comments is like getting feedback from a teacher in class! So that is always helpful :) Good luck in class!
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